Novella Sword of Antar - Revision history

Sudazima: Sudazima moved page Fiction Sword of Antar to Novella Sword of Antar

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Sudazima moved page Fiction Sword of Antar to Novella Sword of Antar

Sudazima at 12:40, 10 September 2019

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Sudazima at 22:03, 9 September 2018

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Sudazima at 13:04, 16 January 2018

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Sudazima at 13:04, 16 January 2018

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Sudazima at 13:03, 16 January 2018

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Sudazima at 00:18, 15 January 2018

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-The Sword of Antar it said, a mighty vessel once, a [[Ship_Dreadnought_AISN_Re|Re superdreadnought]], infact a mighty vessel only an hour ago without a doubt. Now it had to face Justice, a [[Ship_Cruiser_USN_Breeze|Breeze class ship]] sacrificed as little more than a battering ram. Casting the antarean ship in fiery collision the Re ended up in an descending orbit at Kustat, at the far end of the [[Location_Empyrean_Reef|Empyrean reef]].
+The Sword of Antar it said, a mighty vessel once, a [[Ship_Dreadnought_AISN_Re|Re superdreadnought]], infact a mighty vessel only an hour ago without a doubt. Now it had to face the bow of USNV Justice, a [[Ship_Cruiser_USN_Dyeus|Dyeus class battlecruiser]] sacrificed as little more than a battering ram. Casting the Antarean ship in fiery collision the Re ended up in an descending orbit at Kustat, at the far end of the [[Location_Empyrean_Reef|Empyrean reef]].
-Out of breath just a minute ago, but with the collision imminent he could hold it. They seemly flew so slowly, but in reality were just that far away. when the Justice first made contact with the grand antarean vessel it split apart on the massive forward bow specially designed to protect the huge [[Tech_Ion-Array|spinal ion cannons]] within. Chandreshkar could see the nameplate thrown into the darkness of space. Looking like a mere sticker from this distance he had seen it up close in person at the docks, it was a huge piece of metal with building sized letters "USNV Justice". a massive explosion at the impact site shook him around. This small pod didn't have space audio visualizers but the shockwave of material and debris hitting the outside still sounded like thunder struck him. The Sword of Antar was backing out and under as hard as it could, but such a large ship does not easily budge left or right and couldn't dodge the capital ship ram they had setup.
+Out of breath just a minute ago, but with the collision imminent he could hold it. They seemly flew so slowly, but in reality were just that far away. when the Justice first made contact with the grand Antarean vessel it split apart on the massive forward bow specially designed to protect the huge [[Tech_Ion-Array|spinal ion cannons]] within. Chandreshkar could see the nameplate thrown into the darkness of space. Looking like a mere sticker from this distance he had seen it up close in person at the docks, it was a huge piece of metal with building sized letters "USNV Justice". a massive explosion at the impact site shook him around. This small pod didn't have space audio visualizers but the shockwave of material and debris hitting the outside still sounded like thunder struck him. The Sword of Antar was backing out and under as hard as it could, but such a large ship does not easily budge left or right and couldn't dodge the capital ship ram they had setup.
 Here Chandreshkar was, blasting away from danger in an escape pod. This wasn't according to plan of coarse but it seems like the results don't lie.

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 The Sword of Antar it said, a mighty vessel once, a [[Ship_Dreadnought_AISN_Re|Re superdreadnought]], infact a mighty vessel only an hour ago without a doubt. Now it had to face Justice, a [[Ship_Cruiser_USN_Breeze|Breeze class ship]] sacrificed as little more than a battering ram. Casting the antarean ship in fiery collision the Re ended up in an descending orbit at Kustat, at the far end of the [[Location_Empyrean_Reef|Empyrean reef]].
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 ''"This is not getting any easier either"'' he thought.

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-The Sword of Antar it said, a mighty vessel once, a Re superdreadnought, infact a mighty vessel only an hour ago without a doubt. Now it had to face Justice, a Breeze class ship sacrificed as little more than a battering ram. Casting the antarean ship in fiery collision the Re ended up in an descending orbit at Kustat, at the far end of the empyrean reef.
+The Sword of Antar it said, a mighty vessel once, a [[Ship_Dreadnought_AISN_Re|Re superdreadnought]], infact a mighty vessel only an hour ago without a doubt. Now it had to face Justice, a [[Ship_Cruiser_USN_Breeze|Breeze class ship]] sacrificed as little more than a battering ram. Casting the antarean ship in fiery collision the Re ended up in an descending orbit at Kustat, at the far end of the [[Location_Empyrean_Reef|Empyrean reef]].
-Out of breath just a minute ago, but with the collision imminent he could hold it. They seemly flew so slowly, but in reality were just that far away. when the Justice first made contact with the grand antarean vessel it split apart on the massive forward bow specially designed to protect the huge spinal ion cannons within. Chandreshkar could see the nameplate thrown into the darkness of space. Looking like a mere sticker from this distance he had seen it up close in person at the docks, it was a huge piece of metal with building sized letters "USNV Justice". a massive explosion at the impact site shook him around. This small pod didn't have space audio visualizers but the shockwave of material and debris hitting the outside still sounded like thunder struck him. The Sword of Antar was backing out and under as hard as it could, but such a large ship does not easily budge left or right and couldn't dodge the capital ship ram they had setup.
+Out of breath just a minute ago, but with the collision imminent he could hold it. They seemly flew so slowly, but in reality were just that far away. when the Justice first made contact with the grand antarean vessel it split apart on the massive forward bow specially designed to protect the huge [[Tech_Ion-Array|spinal ion cannons]] within. Chandreshkar could see the nameplate thrown into the darkness of space. Looking like a mere sticker from this distance he had seen it up close in person at the docks, it was a huge piece of metal with building sized letters "USNV Justice". a massive explosion at the impact site shook him around. This small pod didn't have space audio visualizers but the shockwave of material and debris hitting the outside still sounded like thunder struck him. The Sword of Antar was backing out and under as hard as it could, but such a large ship does not easily budge left or right and couldn't dodge the capital ship ram they had setup.
 Here Chandreshkar was, blasting away from danger in an escape pod. This wasn't according to plan of coarse but it seems like the results don't lie.

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 {{Infobox novella
 |name=Sword of Antar
-|image=[[image:ULA-Charge-Better.jpg|450px]]
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 |by=Sudazima
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 {{Infobox novella
 |name=Sword of Antar
-|image=[[image:ULA-Charge-Better.jpg|550px]]
+|image=[[image:ULA-Charge-Better.jpg|450px]]
 |by=Sudazima
 }}

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 The Sword of Antar it said, a mighty vessel once, a Re superdreadnought, infact a mighty vessel only an hour ago without a doubt. Now it had to face Justice, a Breeze class ship sacrificed as little more than a battering ram. Casting the antarean ship in fiery collision the Re ended up in an descending orbit at Kustat, at the far end of the empyrean reef.
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 ''"This is not getting any easier either"'' he thought.

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	''"This is not getting any easier either"'' he thought.		''"This is not getting any easier either"'' he thought.

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