Novella Invigilator - Revision history

Sudazima at 19:19, 17 December 2025

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Sudazima: Sudazima moved page Fiction Invigilator to Novella Invigilator

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Sudazima moved page Fiction Invigilator to Novella Invigilator

Sudazima at 23:08, 1 August 2019

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Sudazima at 18:39, 1 August 2019

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Sudazima at 18:38, 1 August 2019

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Sudazima at 22:03, 9 September 2018

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Sudazima at 12:54, 16 January 2018

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Sudazima at 01:07, 16 January 2018

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Sudazima at 00:59, 16 January 2018

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 "I would have thought they'd be chomping at the bit to take advantage of the situation. Afterall, they are now the only power with a fleet worth a damn in dozen sectors."
-"It's not so simple. The council went to great lengths to distance themselves from the Reclamation force. Sure, it was an Antarean force in all but name, but a bulk of the manpower came from the Swordsworn Brotherhoods and that makes a lot of people nervous that this is just a repetition of the [[Crusader_war|Crusader Uprising]]. The Patriarch hasn't exactly been shy about endorsing them either, though even he's been circumspect about calling this a Crusade given recent history."
+"It's not so simple. The council went to great lengths to distance themselves from the Reclamation force. Sure, it was an Antarean force in all but name, but a bulk of the manpower came from the Swordsworn Brotherhoods and that makes a lot of people nervous that this is just a repetition of the [[Crusader_War|Crusader Uprising]]. The Patriarch hasn't exactly been shy about endorsing them either, though even he's been circumspect about calling this a Crusade given recent history."
 This was prudent. Memories of the atrocities committed by the Eternal Fraternity of the Great Journey, known popularly as the Crusaders of Ios, were still fresh in the minds of every citizen of the region. Though the Iosian church had eventually renounced them as heretics and sinners, there was a time when many on Tareno had publicly applauded their resistance to League occupation. This tacit acceptance had become an albatross about the Iosian Ministry's neck for years since, allowing a steady erosion of its moral authority.

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 "I would have thought they'd be chomping at the bit to take advantage of the situation. Afterall, they are now the only power with a fleet worth a damn in dozen sectors."
-"It's not so simple. The council went to great lengths to distance themselves from the Reclamation force. Sure, it was an Antarean force in all but name, but a bulk of the manpower came from the Swordsworn Brotherhoods and that makes a lot of people nervous that this is just a repetition of the Crusader Uprising. The Patriarch hasn't exactly been shy about endorsing them either, though even he's been circumspect about calling this a Crusade given recent history."
+"It's not so simple. The council went to great lengths to distance themselves from the Reclamation force. Sure, it was an Antarean force in all but name, but a bulk of the manpower came from the Swordsworn Brotherhoods and that makes a lot of people nervous that this is just a repetition of the [[Crusader_war|Crusader Uprising]]. The Patriarch hasn't exactly been shy about endorsing them either, though even he's been circumspect about calling this a Crusade given recent history."
 This was prudent. Memories of the atrocities committed by the Eternal Fraternity of the Great Journey, known popularly as the Crusaders of Ios, were still fresh in the minds of every citizen of the region. Though the Iosian church had eventually renounced them as heretics and sinners, there was a time when many on Tareno had publicly applauded their resistance to League occupation. This tacit acceptance had become an albatross about the Iosian Ministry's neck for years since, allowing a steady erosion of its moral authority.

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 Antarean Reclamation Force
 *[[Bio_Kera_Setorian|Kera Cejeanus Setorian]] - Aedile Majoris
-*[[Bio_Marius_Andromedeus_XVI|Ulric Tovengard/Marius Lucan Andromedeus]] - Commodore, Acting Fleet Marshal
+*[[Bio_Marius_Andromedeus_XIV|Ulric Tovengard/Marius Lucan Andromedeus]] - Commodore, Acting Fleet Marshal
 *Rekkoan Hargis - Admiral, Fleet Marshal, deceased
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 He turned to face them. Khalam noted the scar which ran through his left-eye, so similar to [[Bio_Kera_Setorian|Setorian’s]]. Of course, on that score he knew which the original was. The woman’s loyalty to her friend bordered on psychotic.
-“Joachim Noa, Welcome aboard [[Ship_Cruiser_AISN_Dawnstar|Dawn Star]].” He smiled broadly, “I am [[Bio_Marius_Andromedeus_XVI|Marius, of House Andromedeus]]. Your assistance has been most appreciated, thought I apologize for the deception.”
+“Joachim Noa, Welcome aboard [[Ship_Cruiser_AISN_Dawnstar|Dawn Star]].” He smiled broadly, “I am [[Bio_Marius_Andromedeus_XIV|Marius, of House Andromedeus]]. Your assistance has been most appreciated, thought I apologize for the deception.”
 The conversation which followed produced the most delicious smile Sivon had ever countenanced.

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 He turned to face them. Khalam noted the scar which ran through his left-eye, so similar to [[Bio_Kera_Setorian|Setorian’s]]. Of course, on that score he knew which the original was. The woman’s loyalty to her friend bordered on psychotic.
-“Joachim Noa, Welcome aboard [[Ship_Cruiser_AISN_Dawnstar|Dawn Star]].” He smiled broadly, “I am [[Bio_Marius_Lucan_Andromedeus_XVI|Marius, of House Andromedeus]]. Your assistance has been most appreciated, thought I apologize for the deception.”
+“Joachim Noa, Welcome aboard [[Ship_Cruiser_AISN_Dawnstar|Dawn Star]].” He smiled broadly, “I am [[Bio_Marius_Andromedeus_XVI|Marius, of House Andromedeus]]. Your assistance has been most appreciated, thought I apologize for the deception.”
 The conversation which followed produced the most delicious smile Sivon had ever countenanced.

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 Antarean Reclamation Force
 *[[Bio_Kera_Setorian|Kera Cejeanus Setorian]] - Aedile Majoris
-*[[Bio_Marius_Lucan_Andromedeus_XVI|Ulric Tovengard/Marius Lucan Andromedeus]] - Commodore, Acting Fleet Marshal
+*[[Bio_Marius_Andromedeus_XVI|Ulric Tovengard/Marius Lucan Andromedeus]] - Commodore, Acting Fleet Marshal
 *Rekkoan Hargis - Admiral, Fleet Marshal, deceased

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 Once a servant of the Sinestra, Joachim Noa was at one timethe greatest condemner of criminals ever seen in the Serviles Orders, serving with the Justicariat to weed out and condemn the foulest criminals in Antarean space. His exploits in the tracking judgment of men were the stuff of legend. However, a single decision to weigh human life above his orders stripped him of everything, and left him exiled and in search of answers. When old acquaintances arrive on his doorstep with a chance for redemption and vengeance, he discovers that intrigue and betrayal are as much a part of this generation as the last.
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 Following this man was becoming more and more delightful.

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 Once a servant of the Sinestra, Joachim Noa was at one timethe greatest condemner of criminals ever seen in the Serviles Orders, serving with the Justicariat to weed out and condemn the foulest criminals in Antarean space. His exploits in the tracking judgment of men were the stuff of legend. However, a single decision to weigh human life above his orders stripped him of everything, and left him exiled and in search of answers. When old acquaintances arrive on his doorstep with a chance for redemption and vengeance, he discovers that intrigue and betrayal are as much a part of this generation as the last.
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 Following this man was becoming more and more delightful.

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 Antarean Reclamation Force
 *[[Bio_Kera_Setorian|Kera Cejeanus Setorian]] - Aedile Majoris
-*[[Bio_Marius_Lucan_Andromodeus_XVI|Marius Sulla/Marius Lucan Andromodeus]] - Commodore, Acting Fleet Marshal
+*[[Bio_Marius_Lucan_Andromodeus_XVI|Ulric Tovengard/Marius Lucan Andromodeus]] - Commodore, Acting Fleet Marshal
 *Rekkoan Hargis - Admiral, Fleet Marshal, deceased
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 For its part, the Federation political establishment had been doing everything possible to cut the legs from beneath the victors of Halifax. Including the League prizes captured during the battle, the fleet now comprised the single largest military force in the Second district. It was no wonder they were nervous about that many former officers and enlisted ratings returning home drunk on victory obtained outside the Federation power structure. There was even talk of inducting the surviving commander in to the Order of the Dawn.
-Joachim had never heard of the man. One Marius Sulla, a Custodes fostering.
+Joachim had never heard of the man. One Ulric Tovengard, a Custodes fostering.
 The file on him was depressingly thin, a fact that probably irked his host and her mistress, but largely explainable. The Custodes were remarkably effective when it came to secrecy. A junior commander, and tactician. He was young, merely twenty-six standard years.
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 “And you are?”
-“Kera Cejanus Setorian, Aedile Majoris, First Centarii, Antarean Reclamation Force. I represent Fleet Marshall Sulla who now extends his protection to this system for the duration of the crisis.”
+“Kera Cejanus Setorian, Aedile Majoris, First Centarii, Antarean Reclamation Force. I represent Fleet Marshall Tovengard who now extends his protection to this system for the duration of the crisis.”
 “I don’t care who you are, or who you represent. He is a traitor, and a murderer. It is my duty to-“